Illegal Logging in Morong, Bataan
for us humans and those from vehicles.
Illegal logging in the Philippines was done in Midnight so they can operate much carefully. This is a serious crime that the Government needs to improve their capability to monitor such incidence like these. to prevent these problems, we should have a iron hand law so anyone who will try make this move will be enforced to pay their crimes in jail. In Philippines, It is cheaper and easier to simply take trees without replacing them, and when they run out, the loggers can just move to another area.
This problem must first of all addressed to the current administration and the government must take it more seriously.Because as for myself, when we travel from Bataan to Subic we've seen so many mountains that are brown in color as for it's natural appearance.
I consider that the loggers are uneducated because of their manners shown in this certain instance.if we only realize that when we cut a tree or trees i suppose, we should also replace a seed to implement the balance in the environment and its resources.
So the big problem that we will surely face in the future is the Global Warming threat.The atmosphere surrounding us that supports life is a God-Given Gift which must be protected. I think we should be leaders in efforts to eradicate this Illegal loggers not to be a resistant followers. :))
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ReplyDelete1. that must be stop >> that must be stopped
2. it causes too much in our environment >> it causes too much damage to our environment
3. This sentence: "Not only to the fact that people doing this to earn money but this job is so easy to be done." seems unrelated to the first sentence. You could have included this the paragraph which discusses the causes of illegal logging.
4. Illegal logging causing enormous damage >> Illegal logging causes enormous damage
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